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Old 12-29-03, 11:42 AM   #12
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Close battle.... two different types of verse I guess...

Madman had some decent bars, flow was off at times, structure would be better in a short/sharp format. I've noticed it pays to be more witty whilst staying basic with the wording to make a real impact.... i.e the bag of Lays etc... a punch, but something personal could easily cane it.... these lines from Payce were tight -

another Boxing day sale....cuz u require zero struggles,
I only have one verse...n styll beat both of ya doubles!
cant even post ill shit...even I can't inflict Cancer on u!
no need to say it...Its obvious why u aint in no crew!!

Personal, witty and hard hittin....cane most of ya verse really...
Payce had some weaker lines, the ad for sale etc... wasn't feelin it too much, but the flow was there throughout helpin shit connect....
Basically for those two bars above....

Vote - Payce