wow this was a nice piece, it kinda lacked the vocab tho, it was kinda basic, but next to that, it was fulla emotions. The story went very quick so you really had to get in there and feel it... I didn't see the outcome, so that was really nice.
In fact I really didn't except this poem to turn out the way it did, so that made it only positive in my eyes.
Keep 'em comin
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