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<center>punches- ape
flow- ape
structure- ape
vocab- ape
complexitiy- ape
creativity- ape
wordplay- ape

Ape Verse- it was nice and short. full of punches and it had very nice flow. nice structure, with some wordplay. I suggest that you keep you verse short and sweet.

LA Verse- It was bad and long. It had weak punches with horrible flow to go along with it. U need structure, all lines should be the same length, not STRECTHED. You had ok wordplay. I suggest that you change ur style up a little bit. Make it shorter, put some punches, and fix your structure

APE IS MY FINAL VOTE

EVERYONE HIT THESE UP WITH AN HONEST VOTE PLEASE!!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=killer

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=rock1n</center>