word

but breakdown

structure- df
flow- df
punches- df
wordplay- df
enjoyment- df
creativity- df
complexity- df
effor- tie
humor- none
overall- df

SPLIT VERSE: yo, even ya bars out, get betta structure, PUNCHES PUNCHES PUNCHES!! use wordplay and get betta flow

Dark Verse: u had ok structure, ok punches, and aight flow. you did enuff to do the job. work on your wordplay..

everyone hit this up please honest votes only

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