730
Ok, not bad, first of i want to compliment you,
On your stucture..most kids have stretched lines..
In here. Now on with your content..
You had some decent, ok lines..some nice..
Wordplay on his alias..though at times overdone..
& that hairline line is mad old..famous concept..
Overall ok

Carson
Structure was a little off at points..
Though your punches, personals made up for it.
Like the 3 digits line..
In general i'd say your line was easy going..
Enough to win this battle for you.
Overall Ok

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