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Old 12-29-03, 05:11 PM   #3
Key-Low
Presently Light...Waits
 
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From: Hayes, VA aka Haze-where its hard ta see
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It was aight.............both of ya jumped off topic alot and young mike.....you had no structure, word on betta vocab, work on makin sure you stay on topic, try throwin sum multi's out, use a betta rhyme scheme, dont talk about "robbin niggaz".....i lyke tha way yall took tha time to do a collab though.....keep droppin.....and elevate. No hate..............but i feel like i just read a verse from 3 6 Mafia...........stay real, peace, 1
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