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Old 12-29-03, 05:47 PM   #12
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vote-jesus he came a little bit harder, a little bit more direct, silks bars are a little stretched it kinda throws off the flow, crammin too many words between rhymes, other than that not bad keep at it, btoh can use some elevation..jesus took this with an edge

return the favor hit this up we need votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102040