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Old 12-29-03, 05:49 PM   #25
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Punches=Verstyle
Personals=Jacka u had sum dope lines dat i was feelin
Flow=Verstyle
Multis=Verstyle
Wordplay=Jacka jacka u had good use of words verystyle u need 2 improve on this
Vocab=Verstyle
Opener=Verystyle jacka urs was wack and made no sense 2 me
Closer:Verstyle
Multi's:verstyle took this 1 as jacka contained none...jacka if it contained sum it would of bin good and interesting as ur verse was good.
Structure:Jacka good nice structure lines were same length but verstyle urs was fucked up on this battle need 2 improve here

my vote= Verstlye

overally this was a dope battle but i tink verstyle took this 1 jacka unucky man keep elevatin
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