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Old 12-29-03, 05:51 PM   #29
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cin..if i reply to this do you mind voting on a text battle? i wi.ll give you a full breakdown of both tracks first..but i'd like you to give a fair an honest vote on a battle after i've done it..ok?

first up..."tonight"


ok..intro's a lil quiet and long..think i can hear somethin in the backgrond..

first dude

ok...voice is a lil low..

im feelin the opening...nice voice...flow definetely...

nice vocabulary..not over the top but nice...

lol at the chorus...some dude tryna sing...

verse 2..

nice flow again..

lol

"dont fall in love baby its a 1 night fling"

both aint got corny voices which is always nice...

lol

"i wanna make ya mine..but i gota keep it a 1 night"

nice touch..

verse 3 coming up...

lol the generic...chorus dude droppin his 2 cents...

"ima tell you my success story..MONEY COMES FIRST"

that would of been iller if the "money comes first" was said with aggresion but this is a nice little laid back track...

the chorus is growing on me man i like it now..i didnt at first so this is cool..its ends nice tho it woulda been more..hmm.."Professional" if you would have left the beat going a little longer...ok song 2 coming up
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