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Old 12-29-03, 06:07 PM   #30
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ok....

"its nuthin"

aah this is more ot my preference..some hard shit...

nice drop...on the beat str8 away..

nice multi's an rhyme scheme...

the car sorta sound over the top is a lil too loud...jus realised how nice your mic quality...

"Its the 'Earth' versus me..the 'DIRTIEST' in this industry"

if the wordplay was intentional as im geussing that is ILL

lol rewinded to it again...

"I (W)rap Tighter that a turban on a hindu"

the rap - wrap wordplay is kinda played but it was dropped nicely...

"From the Chest down you burn an from the neck up you bleed"

jus illness..

damn your quality is ill...especially when you jump on the mic an start talking...

by the way you rap..i think you;d be ILL at audio battles...

foreal this second track is alot more to my liking...illness an flow kept throughout without having to sound forced...

foreal ya up on the level of nyce quota an some other ill cats...





oh yea drop a vote here please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...56&pagenumber=1

i did take time to give in depth feedback on both pieces...

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