i agree thhe first verse was the weaker, lyrically that is...but i dont know the beat so... the second seemed to go better on paper....content was stronger.n the feeling of it went... i liked the third...but some of it seemed like it was jus slapped in....complexity matched with basic stuff...wasnt really a constant level, but most caught me...thats to the beat i put it to..so ...i dunno....not bad in my eyes quite good....pZ..audio????