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Old 12-29-03, 06:55 PM   #4
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From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin
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this was a good piece!

it was simply written, with no big vocab or anything, but everything seemed right, flowed right, sounded right, everything was where it needed to be in this piece. it started nice, and ended just as nice. i liked that it started to sound on the happy side near the end instead of a whole piece about poor me. l'll look for some more!

~Tera~
DONT HATE
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keep singing in heaven
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