Im a battle rhymer straight up hard to the core
flippin flow like pancakes, or like your moms puss when its raw
^what the fuck? that line didnt even rhyme. but ill count as a weak/ok punch
In da game a life Im like scarface in my hood
So shit, nobody's as pussy as jgoodz.
^this wasnt a bad punch. it kinda made me giggle
Come into my hood we'll getm stuckup
Change your name from jgoodz to jgotfuckedup
^i liked this one. it made me laugh. this might be what won it
I dont play in this game wit force less than deadly or lethal
The only votes you gon get is from jmomz and j'speople!
^not bad. it was ok. i was still laughing from the other one.
You probrably think that im funny man your girl laughs too
She said the only thing funnier than me is you in the bed room
^ehhh.... bad closer. this hurt you a bit. you need to think of the best diss for this part. just a lil tip

rating - 6.5/10


look fucka-Iima kill you if neccessary,
in in my hood Im so known by any means legendary//
^not bad opener. but it wasnt good.
I know your flowz- You probaly treasure very
but ima pirate in a battle and the cannon rap have your treasure buried!//
^weak punch. but ill count it cause its ur first time
and your ryhmes muthafucka-you really need practice-and you eat so much pussy I bet your mouth look like a cactus//
^this was kinda of a stupid line, because u are kinda complimenting him in a good way (unless its a girl. lol) and your not really dissing him. if 208 is a girl, then ill count as a punch
Plus you are what you eat pussy-You probaly even whack-it and your hood so soft like the one on your jackit!//
^this was pretty good. good punch.
and you will never stick me up you pole rider-plus i heard your still gon pay j goodz to be your ghost rider!//
^this was weak. plus im not sure if its a good idea to have teh same words rhyme. but you can check the W.E.C for that (looks i need to too.)
you so fired and Im fired up! -spit so many hot flamez at whack namez rap battles .com need a fire truck//
^this was a good punch. not much to say, but the flow was a lil off from one-another. but ill count as a good punch
your not a boss so you wont hire luck-and the next time you approach me better kiss sire's but!//
^this didnt rhyme. gonna cost ya a bit. weak punch too.
you a fag probaly admire nut!-and your ryhmes the only things that suck besides your luck!//
^terrible closer. like i said to 208, need to elevate ur shit. but it was ok.

rating - 5/10

vote - 208