dam nice keystyle. One of the best i've seen in a while. Flow was good. Rhyme scheme was also good. Had some nice imagery in there. i could really see wut u was sayin in my head. To me, there really aint nuttin wrong wit it. I like it, and cant wait ta see the finished product. And this will make a great audio.

PS
return the favor when u C my name on this board, it will be much appreciated
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