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Old 12-29-03, 07:53 PM   #27
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Breakdown

punches jack: ya punches fallen short like midget ski divers..
this was nice// lyrical your shit was good but some coulda been flipped better bro

personals both: my heavenly rhymes arent easy to contain..
cuz ya 0-0 record is bout to be stained//Jacka gets shit on by MCs...more then parked cars by birds

metas lyrical: U dont even got the basics.....like a boxer wit no-jab// jack you lacked alot

flow both: both was consistant and through out but lyrical dont rhyme the same words...example...blah blah me, blah blah me

wordplay jack: the way i author flames like books of matches// lyrical you had some that woulda worked but you didnt consist of making it work

overall good battle pretty even throughout but i gotta go with jack

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