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Old 12-29-03, 09:14 PM   #10
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Nice battle...
J Goodz verse was fucked up basically due to the structure 'n the fact that some parts didn't rhyme... the monks/temple line stoodout as pretty creative but otherwise it lacked any good personals/punches etc....
Aragons lacked anything standoutish also but still came hard enough to take the battle in most aspects... flow was kinda shaky at times I guess but there were personals in there and it all connected well enough to do damage...
J Goodz just sort out the structure, short n sharp bars, add some decent wordplay to help the flow, it'd improve ya battles by far...

Vote - Aragon

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