^Dont lie..
Hardly a nice battle.

J Goodz
It has been said a couple of time..
Switch up your structure..obviously,
This is losin' you votes.
Though thats hardly the problem,
You just lack a battle mentality..
You got some ok lines..nice concepts....
Potential nice punches, but u dont progress..
Word them right..work on it.
Evolve your wordplay & witty punches & personals..
Overall Weak-Ok..

Aragorn
Obviously simple, no more was needed.
You did what u had to do.. ok overall verse..
Some ok punches..& personals..
Like i said, nothin to special but way better,
Then J Goodz verse.
Overall Ok-Average

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