This was just an OK battle in my opinion. Both of y'all need to keep working on your craft... Just Keeping It Real No HATE. Use more multis, set up your punches better and increase the vocab ur using.

Im a battle rhymer straight up hard to the core
flippin flow like pancakes, or like your moms puss when its raw
^ Pretty common insult... OK Punch
In da game a life Im like scarface in my hood
So shit, nobody's as pussy as jgoodz.
^ Mediocre - It's Funny but the setup doesn't really lead to the punch
Come into my hood we'll getm stuckup
Change your name from jgoodz to jgotfuckedup
^ This was the best line of the whole verse... MAD Funny YO - Good Setup and follow-thru
I dont play in this game wit force less than deadly or lethal
The only votes you gon get is from jmomz and j'speople!
^ Mediocre again... but you're on a roll so it's cool.
You probrably think that im funny man your girl laughs too
She said the only thing funnier than me is you in the bed room
^ Weak Diss... Come HARDER Son... Multis Yo... you wanna leave people remembering how intricate your flow is.

total rating - 6 out of 10


look fucka-Iima kill you if neccessary,
in in my hood Im so known by any means legendary//
^ Cool... Bad grammar though.... but liked the "By Any Means Legendary"
I know your flowz- You probaly treasure very
but ima pirate in a battle and the cannon rap have your treasure buried!//
^ Wack... Punches have to some Punchiness to them... this was lame....
and your ryhmes muthafucka-you really need practice-and you eat so much pussy I bet your mouth look like a cactus//
^ Nice off-beat Punch but I'm still not seeing any Personals... makes you seem Pre written
Plus you are what you eat pussy-You probaly even whack-it and your hood so soft like the one on your jackit!//
^ Cool... "Soft like the [hood] on your jacket" that was original
and you will never stick me up you pole rider-plus i heard your still gon pay j goodz to be your ghost rider!//
^ Very Weak - Just not feeling it...
you so fired and Im fired up! -spit so many hot flamez at whack namez rap battles .com need a fire truck//
^ Poor Structure but it was the concept was aight
your not a boss so you wont hire luck-and the next time you approach me better kiss sire's but!//
^ WACK AGAIN!!!
you a fag probaly admire nut!-and your ryhmes the only things that suck besides your luck!//
^ AND ONE AGAIN... WACK!!! - Multi's + Flow + Structure + Personals + Vocab.... This is your closer Damn SON! Bring the HEAT!!!

total rating - 4 out of 10

Vote - nam_208