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Old 12-29-03, 11:15 PM   #14
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beat is coo.

quality is ok.. not to good. flow is MONOTONE. kill monotone. you sound the same with no variation in ya voice. try spittin like your casting out a demon.

turn the vocals up a bit. lyrics are not to good not to bad. second buy. flow is not my style. i see potential. but it seems like he tryin to hard. ryhme scheme is simple.

chorus is monotone. with that fake phone effect. i see elevation.
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