first off.. start puttin the high fi link up.. not the link to the page.-

i see where he think you got an accent....... flow is ok. its unstable tho. to monotone. pronounce all your words. i think that would fit better for you........

verse 2.. dont do that.... this has Cool Edit pro written all over it.
quality is shit on this part.............................................. ............. chorus is like you have an accent.... i dunno. practice spittin.....