hmm, this poem...i wont lie i did not read it all couse it was too long and in my opinion(which doesnt mean its tru) it was boring. i like the message. very nice imagery. the intro was better good but then it lost its point. i enjoyed it for a while. good stuff with the message u just gotta find a way to get it across better. i like it sum. outa 10 id give it 7. nice, good message, alright imagery. keep doin ya thing till ya get it right, thats all i can say.

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