Lyrical jeez got this one.

Paddy you need to direct your flow at the opponent line for line.
Your struc is cool, You got the basics, just work on the meta's and make them personal.
You guys had cool drops. Lyrical you came hard. You know that shit you got under your pic came from Big PUn right? You should give him credit.
Vote Lyrical
I took my time.... please don't waste it.
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