aight, ive read a couple of ure poems but this one gots a (ahem) aspect bout it that i like so i decided to actually reply. i loved the message, i tried writing a poem like this for my girl but it was harder than i thought. so lets see...i like the poem couse of the message. the thing that bothered me was the flow, it was a bit rough but it didnt take much aways from it. the vocab was alright, a bit simple but used well. over all id give it a 8 outa 10. good but to simple and short. good stuff tho...

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