strengths: you rhymed the whole way through and keep the same flow too which is really good and thats what I like to look for in these types of things.

Weaknesses: Seems a little drawn out in most areas, but besides that I never really found anything wrong with this one.

Conclusion: Good flow, Good rhymes, pretty good all around with the exception that it was a little drawn out in some area but keep up the good work because I can see you becoming a prettyphat freestyling rapper.