alright drop by Criticize22, good drop by TheUnderRated. I'll give my evaluation right here.

Criticize22...your drop was good, except some of your punches didn't hit as hard as they could have and a few of your lines were stretched. Also, in the 3rd bar...I don't even think you dissed your opponent. Now this is what TUR took advantage of as he does in his opener
"Bitch I seen ya battle with 1st to wreck dawg
That was some prewritten shit no personals at all"

See what I mean, he saw your flaw and burned you on it. TUR wins this battle, much more personals and harder punches. He also did have a better structure.

Vote- TUR

Return the favour...both of you, by dropping honest votes on the battle in my signature and this one below.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101459