yo i think V took this because.....

Doze, i see you got skill. its obvious in your vocabulary and ability to use words and flow nicley. i think all u gotta do is just harness that capability into solid more direct punches at your oppononent. say it straight up. be a little more raw and your shit will come off more agressive and punches will land easier. get a little personal wit it next time....

Verstyle, good verse had it all down solid. punches landing...flow right on...had some personals in there. Only piece of advice i could say is to not over do the stuff about how youre gonna physically murder him and shit. i dont know....just my opinion. but otherwise all punches hit hard and had some creative shit in there. good verse.

my vote: verstyle