haha wit ya verse lookin like a newbie wrote it? first of all..u had all those gay fuckin caps in ya verse like u have a gun to load it into, an plus u breakin it off..where instead of this..

Your Not Going To Win...So Just Lose Hope
& We Know...
....Your Bullshit By What You Just Wrote

can be this

Your not going to win so just lose hope and we know
Your bullshit by what you just wrote

doesn't flow proper..that's why your structures bad..ain' hatin duke, jus fix up that fucked up structure..