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Originally posted by Phoeniix
chrit...u had that sarcastic/cocky tone that u always come with. and thats what wins battles for you. props
vote: chrit
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See ^^^...
That's the "non-chalant" shit I've been referencing.
Someone else sees it too.
Good, thought it was just me.
Better punches, more complexity, better wordplay, and more personals...
Win this for Chrit.
Pet did ok for a pre-write.
(If it wasn't, I'm sorry for that)
But he had no personals at all.
And alot of played stuff.
Still, I see hope there.
A couple of your lines had some nice wordplay.
Just up the aggression with your punches.
Make em harder.
Peace