Petrafy.. I can tell you've been at a different site where all the quotations, apostrophes, and dashes are cool. Here you gotta get rid of it. Completely fucks your structure and flow up. Just be simple.. Example: Chrit's verse... Well structure.. Good balance of wordplay. Too many filler from chrit.. Harder punches for petrafy.. But you only had played metas.. and Multis aren't that great here either when you have them like you did. Get less violent and more intellegient. Be witty. Be smart. Out clever your opponents.

Vote- Chrit

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