structure it better, was difficult to read and follow the flow here, content kinda remined me of a Ja Rule song from "Blood in my eye"..... especially this line:
"I stand alone and I aint afraid to squeze//tha desert eze thats never on safety,"

cut away from the net gangsta image, try something with more originality...go to the tutorials forum and learn about different aspects of text writing...keep spittin' though, you'll elevate sonn enough!


return the favour please if you can..cheers:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101062