yo, honestly wasnt feelin this, good heart in it, but vocab needs some elevatin, fo example, throw rhymes in other places than the end of a line

with out you the hood aint the same//
ill kill a nigga if they disrespect your name//

with out you the hood just aint the same
i'll kill a nigga good fa disrespectin ya name

or something to that effect

...the final blesses state....


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