Improve on content (self prop verses are played to death)...

Format, separate your lines.

Up your vocabulary with more complex words...
(Don't flood the shit with em, alot of kids think a dictionary word has to be followed by 800 of em, it don't though...about one every line, every other line is cool)

Utilize wordplay...

For example...

why must you try to contest wit me/im lettin eveyone now you'll never get the best of me

Can become...

You can't contest me, even if ya brought Ed McMahon...
Cuz kid, this ain't a sweepstakes despite tha broom in ya hand!

See...
Wittier, harder hitting, and fun for the peeps who have ta judge ya shit.

Work on that for a spell...

Peace

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