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yo, this shit was a solid drop, for the most part it flowed real well, some places i though ya had some forced multis like
people seem-to-think that its hate that causes loves beam-to-sink...
and with all gleams-and-minks its misguided love that streams-and-links...
the beam to sink part....didnt quite catch that, coulda left it out, cause the gleams and minks line was tight but i was distracted from it by the for mentioned forced line...
but that whole opener down to scrapes-my-shape was tight,flowin right from a solid rhyme scheme into some wordplay shit with the clouded head rainin and shit that nice too.
new to this board so keep ya eyes up and hit my threads
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