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Old 12-30-03, 02:23 PM   #13
prophacyz
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overall this was a pretty weak ass battle.

matchyou, you came wit some nice punches, a good flow, nice structure (which made it easier for me to read), some okay personals, nice multis, and metaphors. i think if you keep elevatin you could be one of da best on this site. good verse

ah, prez, one word for your verse...WACK...fucked structure, played out lines in every category, no personals, and you didn't even rhyme half tha time...u need to work on alla those things. go WEC and get some help, then come back to battle when you got it all together aight?

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