High Class: since this battle is for elite application, im telling you that you are average elevated front lines material, but not elite.
Pana definitely took this with some better punches. high class i realize you had metties throughout your verse. . but i didnt think they were very good ones. some were unneeded, and some did not rhyme well enough with the previous mettie. for example:

its a bet / falsley-claimed-vet : i had to go back & re-read to make it flow & it still only flowed averagely.

create action / lame in-fraction / lacks fashion : none of those "metties" rhyme with the mettie before. create action / lame in fraction : altho they have the same # of syllables, they just dont go together. lame in fraction / lacks fashion: lacks doesnt rhyme with lame, and fashion is a bad rhyme for fraction.

Punches for high class: your punches were really, non-existant. didnt have much in the way of punches, and the ones i did notice were played. and calling those a punch was stretching it.

Jay Pana:

Sit Down And Take A Seat Kid, Class Is In Session
I'm Exposing Him For What He's Worth, Like Taxicab Confessions
an ok punch. nothing wrong structurally with this bar.

I'll Take Tha Leg And Give You Tha Boot, You're 3rd Rate
I'll Rid You Of Your Chances Quickly, Like Early Stages Of Prostate
a good punch, again nohing wrong structurally.


Take A Long Look At Elite, You Won't Make Tha List
This Was Your Second Chance, You've Come Up Short And Missed
Revoked Ya Application. .I Can't Let Tha Crap In
I Don't Kno What's Worse. .His Verses Or Macho Man Rappin
filler, but. . most of his verse was filler so it didnt hurt you winning

You Don't Stand A Chance...
...Winning Shouldn't Be One Of Your Worries
I'm Leaving This Kid Speechless, Like Tha Helen Keller Story
doesnt rhyme to well. ok punch .

As Many Times He Says It, You'd Think He Really Gets Serious
He Thinks He Can Hang With Elite, LOL, And I Thought I Was Getting Delirious
I'm Jus Getting In Tha Swing Of Things, You're Tha First Victim To Show
Take This Loss As A Lesson, Now Get Back In Line Hoe

an average punch about elite, followed by filler, but a little funny filler. "get back in line hoe".


pana takes this with not much problem. high class you were alright. and dont bitch at the voters when they break it down. .