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Old 12-30-03, 04:30 PM   #9
deela03
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Nam:
good verse liked this one better then the last one i voted on
you had some good punches ya flow was on key was structured pretty good couldve been better
alright verse
7/10

J Goodz:

ight ya verse needs some work you rambled on about the same things for 2 long and repeated words to much this isnt a repetitive contest of how much u can say hood pussy and treasure
ya punches were lacking and i didnt feel were very hard
ya flow started off smooth then you started repeating and it dropped to being boring like reading a history book
was poorly structured after the first few lines
4/10

Vote: Nam for reasons stated above