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Old 12-30-03, 04:53 PM   #10
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pretty lame battle, dint help with 'Ocan' bein in it lol.

Ocanti-ure flow were good an structure, but ffs sake the complexity were fvckin dire man really was,u need to work on that an keep ya complexity an flow at the sorta level it is.

yoW-ure verse was all around better, prodcuing a higher level of complexity an wordplay. But the complexity got a lil too complex on sum lines, an the flow suffered......but i liked the wording u were using an so i enjoyed reading ya spit.......keep it up

overall*Yo what up.