pretty decent...reminded me off 'pac though...was it inspired by him..?

Youn have good vocab, and you used it well, didn't over use or under use it...Flow was good, you had some nice internals in here, flowed long pretty nicely...

"Rumors said I was alive,jus switched locations.
Really I ditched salvation, cause I missed isolation.
While asleep I would have homicidal dreams.
Of homicidal fiends,trying to take a nigga's cream." - nice...

try to come up with a more original topic, rather than 'pac...but you have potential..use it wisely...3/5