Detrimental
Good verse, you started of well..
Nailed some personals & had sum witty lines..
Overall i think your piece was nice, But..
Cud've been better with some re-wording.
Also like Born 2 Kill said, Your closer had a good..
Concept, but u lacked the right execution.
Overall Good.

Chrit
Nice.. your wordplay & punches basically shut it down..
Some ok quotables in there..
Basically both where equal but Chrit just edged..
The punches..creative..
Overall Good..

vote Chrit

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