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Old 12-30-03, 05:36 PM   #21
Straight Ace
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..^ *sigh* @ Kuntry..

prophacyz
Although your verse was good, it was not better.
Unlike others claim it was, ur 'punches' did not hit,
That hard & for example ur openin line..thats hardly,
A punch.. It could be aimed at anyone..
..Overall Ok..Not bad.. work on ^.

Born to Kill
Dont battle in FL, obviously..see for yourself.
A nice, clean structured verse with some ok hitting,
Punches.. Everything Prop did good..u did better.
Basically.. & a nice comeback..
Overall Ok,Good.. better punches/battle verse.

vote Born to Kill

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