Profit
Elevate, thats all i got to say..
Im not sayin ur that bad or hatin..
Just tellin u that, u should elevate,
I could go on tellin u to work on punches & personals,
& all those other 'catagories'...But..
truth is, u need to work on ur overall writing skills.
You had a ok verse..nothin special..some OK lines..
Overall Below Average - Ok..

Crooklyn
^ That goes for you to..elevate..
But, u had the better verse & upper hand in punches..
..This time.
You where slightly better then Profit, but slightly..
..Is better to..
so..

vote Crooklyn

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