Normally i'd break down both contestans verses.
A little explanation & a overall rating for the verse..
This battle hardly has anything to break down,
To both, elevate.. J Goodz, your piece looks pre-
written, thats never a good thing..u lacked punches..
..Both had no personals.. or good concepts..
Add more complexity in form of wordplay n personals..
Dig through someones profile or previous battles to..
Get material on which u can build your personals.
Nam_208 had a slightly better battle verse..
Therefore, he gets my vote.
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To both, whenever I up my battles, please take time..
To vote on them to, as i do/did on yours..
Especially you..J goodz.
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vote Nam_208