Well
crooklynite had better structure, even with all the //
He took the following catagories
struc
wordplay
flow
personals

Mc Profit took the followin catagories
meta's
multi's
sust

Overall I give my vote to Crook.
Now gentlemen...It is cordial to vote on a man's battle after he took the time to vote on yours.

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-strobe