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Old 12-30-03, 07:50 PM   #23
Quelude
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Ocanti... calm yo ass down. You make yourself look stupid with all those unneccesary comments.
You got demolished. You need to wrok on your structure and your flow. Itis obvious that you can rap but you need to learn to transmit that to your computer. The way you write it is the way we will interpret it.
Yo what up you was clean in the majority of categories, just come a lil harder with the punches and throw some more personals in there.
Vote here.... Keep it gangsta!
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