U thought u were a 'gifted' rapper, but ur text? Looks like u left-it-in-wrappers..
I mean damn, "El Veterano"... Who the fuck has heard of a mexican-rapper?...

decent attempt at a lil personal could've been better tho

The pic in ya avatar is jus who you wannabe, and sadly never gonna be..
And now i'ma refer to you as 'Anterior' the way you always seem to 'front on me'...

wording a lil off it seems weird but decent attempt coo bar

I thought u were different, but then i realised when it comes to wack theres only one-sort..
Heres one-thought..... like cicumcision ima leave this fuckin dick cut-short...

played

Cos you're not an emcee, so don't be suprised if your side of the poll don't see-votes..
I mean you've got 300 posts and 2 battles, all you seem to do is fuckin free-post...

nice personal

Fake veteran, i didnt wanna break it to ya but truthfully we all think ur quite-gay..
And i know ure not a phat(fat) rapper cos ur classed as a god damn light-weight...

nice lil personal and wordplay


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you came to rapbattles running your mouth but got no respect
cause your like a vollyball ref, you only talk loud over the net

played concept volleyball/net

forget your songs they get no replys... unless your crew did it
hes like a fag on dildos hes always upping his own shit

flows off but the punch is nice

get it? ...detrimentals like a stillborn baby dieing a early death
sorry 'dog' newbie crews cant save your life cause they aint 'vets' yet

played concept vets/dogs


wait,..you clame you do text and audio, you say you do it all
damn...if your skills are universal its a small world after all

lol i like this line

your downfalls 1000 pounds of presure right in your face
when my punch conects your face caves in, like saddams hiding place

not really feeling this bin laden would have been a better choice

overall det had the better personals, multis, and punches and every other category el didnt do bad tho


my vote

detrimental