Opener ----southerner cuz he didnt feed it
Closer ---- southerner
Punches ----southerner just hit you more, yours was a story but not really directed fully at this guy
Metaphors----tie??????
Structure----I liked your story structure ----ocanti ----i liked southerners too, easy to read

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102450

return the favor and no hate votes, i hate those