masta c, you wrote it well but wtf .. it sounds like some kind of childrens poem or some shit .. i really did not like it, i was expecting at least some kind of twist or something making it worthwhile, but instead it was just like a blast from the second grade .. boo

executive, blah .. you didn't have anything too great either .. you had the lesser flow factor which is basically what decided this battle .. which is really sad .. but yeah

both of you work on your writing ..
v. masta c

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