Banned
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IP:
Yo, ya'll both got some serious talent from where I'm sittin.
Ocanti: Your libra focus was too much and too weak. You gotta use your wordplay better and you aint really seem to get down to the punches for real. Nice flow and structure though. And the personals sucked. But we all gotta elevate, you included. Oh and by the way, anyone who reads the bottom of your messages can tell you are a girl.
Yo What Up: Yo, you got the ill punches, but your structure sucks like hell. Now to me that don't matter that much, but it can be important come votin' time. Also your joint got the point across, but you need more flow. Sometimes your shit just wasn't rhymin. Wordplay was pretty tight. Personals was pretty tight.
For both of you: I don't see much dickridin' goin on here. Just accept what people got to say and use it to your advantage. The whole RB aint against you cause you a girl or whatever, Ocanti.
Close, but I gotta go with Yo What Up
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