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Old 12-31-03, 07:51 AM   #14
Xquizit
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BREAKDOWN!!!!!!!!!!!!!

COLLISON

I no longer hit wit bullets just *ROCKETS*, and leave battles closed like neclace *LOCKETS/
rip ya arms out the *SOCKETS*, beat you senseless with'em till ya face is pushed in like *POCKETS/
OK OPENER LITTLE SIMPLE RHYME SCHEME

no change of TOPIC, all ya text and audio is *NONSENSE*, it could never prosper over my treacherous *CONTENTS/
this battle will be won and closed like a *LOCK-IN*, I wouldn't say it was a KO but a TKO the way ya body got hit and lyrically *KNOCKED-IN/
KINDA WEAK HERE AND MAN UR LINES ARE STREEEETCHED

yo rhymes are outta style and forgot like the word *JOSHIN!!!/
I keep *ON* runnin catz over and jumpin on *DOMES* like PRIEST *HOLMES/
BLAH

Check mah *BARS* you're not able to defeat this rising *STAR*, I haven't even spit the minimum and beatin you by *FAR/
I got more chrome than a Big Tymer's #1 stunna *CARS/
PLZ TELL ME U AINT JUST SAY DAT?

I *BLAST* so *FAST* olympic judges couldn't clock how quickly I whipped dat *ASS/
Your fuckin *TRASH* i turn punks to *ASH* with a Rhyme *MASS*, of *1000 KILOGRAMS* to smoke you faster then lime green *GRASS/
VERSE WAS WACK HORRIBLE...ELEVATE HOMIE FA REAL....GET IN THE MIRROR AND FREESTYLE BATTLE YOURSELF...THATS WHAT I DID...ATLEAST TRY DON'T STRETCH UR LINES AND TAKE ALL DEM FUNNY ASS SYMBOLS OUT UR VERSE
OVERALL=4/10


ANTONIO

Focus'd slained this herb, so I'll hit ur ribs to make u verbs fumble+
Callision? Ur words crumble, it now appears like ur verse is mumbled+
PRETTY NICE

U've been lacking depth..pretend this is an audio..Listen..U suck ass in text+
Strapping ether to a top dogg surgeon is the only way ya impact a vet+
VET=VETNARIAN=LINES ARE PLAYED


U could double ur efforts, but u'll just be cloning wak..Ur phony black+
Ur record 0 in 1,Okay..I'll take it easy cuz Wisconsin aint known for rap+
LOL

Ur writtens going audio is like listening to a moaning cat, U screech talk+
I have ya tasted graves in a dreams, Kill ya off while ya sleep walk+
...

Ya stupid..donated bmx bikes is the only way ya could FREEstyle+
Ya could guess star on Mardres Gras but still wouldn't be wild+
[B]WHY WOULD HE WANNA BE WILD????? WEAK ASS VERSES FROM BOTH EMCEES BUT BANDERAS TOOK THIS BARELY BECAUSE HE HAD STRONGER PUNCHES NICER STRUCTURE AND A GOOD SCHEME


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