^punches...?^

i liked it dawg..Once again you showed your skill and ability to express emotions n' really make us feel the lyrics. You potrayed an image of regret...

"strolled over, then it hit me that i already knew her/
but she'd grown beautiful, god if i'd known the future/" - loved that line...

Your flow and rhyme scheme were good...i thought it flowed smoothly throughout and you had some decent internals in here as well. As for your vocab, it as good but wasn't as complex as i've seen you do..however that didn;t matter as i still felt the piece, vocab is obsoluete when you can get the story through like you can..

4/5 was real good...hook was nice as well..related to the verse..dope.